I changed my mind because I thought that some can actually try and define greed in a different way to represent a good future for us all. But through a thorough researching, hypothesizing, conjugating and contemplating I have learned that there’s no way you can use greed for the better, greed is just wrong, it creates a class struggle and creates capitalists that are always ready to alienate and enslave a great population for their own self-serving motives.Greed is bad as it drives people to do unethical, immoral, and illegal things in the pursuit of more money. Rich people can invest their wealth in stocks, bonds, real estate, and other financial investment when they could still be contributing more to society as we have children that are dying of poverty.
Another bad result of greed is people using government money to help themselves get rich and build their wealth while taking tax money that could go to help the poor and needy. Most of this money is said to help benefit the poor and needy, but this has yet to be seen. It seems that the money instead goes into the pocket of those who don’t need any more money; while the rich get richer the poor continue to get poorer.
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